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Reviews Reviewer: Kiel TOTAL: 8/10 Thanks for the link on the very top of the site. It made me much easier to check if you linked the reviews site or not. I love your site because it looks very cute. Very pixelly. I don't like how the text is centered though, although you could make it justified. On content, I love it as well. It's very nice and cute. You also have freebies for the visitors which is a really nice thing as well. I love the layout that you have here. I don't know why the head image on top seems largened to me and it's not the actual size. I think it would look better if it was the actual size. Suggestions? Add a blog! It would be more entertaining if there was a blog in your site. Great job otherwise. My comments to this review: Yes, the layout-image is largened, if I should have used it as it real size, that would make a pretty tiny layout... I do understand what you mean, tho! The grass looks kinda cluttered, but I'm simply to lazy to change it. I agree with you about the centered text; it does look kinda ugly, so as you might see (?) I have changed it a bit for areas that are a bit more "texty" Blog? I don't know... I might add one someday... 
Reviewer: Nile Score Card:
First Look: 10/10 Very friendly. A lot of cute pixels. Splash: 9/10 The image is so friendly upon entering. Very organized, however, I only see your site title on the window title bar. Althought your visitors are aware that your layout may be based on your entrance image, your site title will be a welcoming beacon! Design: 17/20 Very near flawless pixelling. The green grass though looks like a green amoeba with all its floating parts. If you made a sliver of green grass, and used a grass tube at 20%, it will improve your image greatly. I have done that for a fairy I made sitting on a mushroom and it really does justice. Your layout is a little heavy on the load. I have DSL, but for reviewing, I use my backup dialup and at 56K, it loads slowly. However, not too slow that I would become disinterested. Your entrance was enough to spark curiosity, so it is well worth the wait. Upon entering, your first image in the iframe was missing "meeshabasedoll.gif" Maybe it was not loaded, or not linked to the correct subdirectory. Content: 18/20 Your pixelling is wonderful, but no excuse for your visitors to not get to read about the pixel artist/doller behind them. It is one of those things most visitors to any site will want to find out about. You have tons of stuff to adopt, use for dolling and more. The only thing I took off from was for not having any info on you, even just general. Trust me, your site visitors will love to see how much they have in common with you. Overall: 27/30 This site is very kawaii. Almost perfect. Very organized. Only a few things I pointed out that will make this site "cyber perfect". One more is since you seem to have a lot of pixel experience and good work, you should offer more tutorials. TOTAL: 91/100 Very Good!!! My comments to this review: You've pointed out quite a few things that I know I need to work a bit more on, I really apprechiate all the constructive critisism! Oh, and by the way, there is actually a little bit of info about myself at the website (if you scroll further down the about me-page)...I just hid it very well... I guess I better "unhide it" again...I just never thought anyone would be interested in reading about silly lil me I suppose.. And yes, I noticed the broken image myself, but I didn't have the chance to get on this computer to fix it until today. It was linked correctly, I had just forgotten to upload it with the ftp-program...
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